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The given map show the chages in Felixstone in 1967to 2001.

The given map show the chages in Felixstone in 1967to 2001. 06dx5

In detailed view, the major change comes in the north east side of the area because farmland was cleared and constructed swimming pool, hotel and tennis courts. In the west of the high street shops remained unchanged and in the east side of the high street shops were replaced by apartments. However, the golf course to the north west of the area was untouched. Probing further, in the south of the area cafe and dunes were remained unchanged and hotel which was on the right side of the dunes replaced by hotel and big car park. Whereas, in the south of the dunes wind turbines were allocated. Moreover, the southeast of hotel marina and pier were converted into public beach and fish market was demolished and added private beach which was located to the east of the hotel. Also, sea was situated in the south of the cafe.

In detailed view, the major This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 in the This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.north-eastnortheast
north east
 side of the area This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 farmland was cleared
 and constructed swimming pool, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 and tennis courts. In the west of the high street shops remained unchanged and in the east side of the high street shops were replaced
 by apartments. However
, the golf course to the This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.north-westnorthwest
north west
 of the area was untouched
. Probing further
, in the south of the area 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 and dunes were remained
 unchanged and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 which was on the right side of the dunes replaced by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 car park. “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whereas
, in the south of the dunes wind turbines were allocated
. Moreover
, the southeast of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 marina and pier were converted
 into public beach and fish market was demolished
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 private beach which was located
 to the east of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
. Also
, sea was situated
 in the south of the 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
. 