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The given map show the chages in Felixstone in 1967to 2001.

The given map show the chages in Felixstone in 1967to 2001. 06dx5
In detailed view, the major change comes in the north east side of the area because farmland was cleared and constructed swimming pool, hotel and tennis courts. In the west of the high street shops remained unchanged and in the east side of the high street shops were replaced by apartments. However, the golf course to the north west of the area was untouched. Probing further, in the south of the area cafe and dunes were remained unchanged and hotel which was on the right side of the dunes replaced by hotel and big car park. Whereas, in the south of the dunes wind turbines were allocated. Moreover, the southeast of hotel marina and pier were converted into public beach and fish market was demolished and added private beach which was located to the east of the hotel. Also, sea was situated in the south of the cafe.
In detailed view, the major
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change
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comes
in the
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north east
side of the area
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because
farmland
was cleared
and constructed swimming pool,
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hotel
and tennis courts. In the west of the high street shops remained unchanged and in the east side of the high street shops
were replaced
by apartments.
However
, the golf course to the
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
north west
of the area
was untouched
. Probing
further
, in the south of the area
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cafe
and dunes
were remained
unchanged and
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hotel
which was on the right side of the dunes replaced by
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hotel
and
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big
car park.
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Whereas
, in the south of the dunes wind turbines
were allocated
.
Moreover
, the southeast of
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hotel
marina and pier
were converted
into public beach and fish market
was demolished
and
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added
private beach which
was located
to the east of the
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hotel
.
Also
, sea
was situated
in the south of the
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
.

IELTS academic The given map show the chages in Felixstone in 1967to 2001.

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