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The pie chart represents the Coca-cola sales across the globe

The pie chart represents the Coca-cola sales across the globe 11rYM
The pie chart represents the Coca-cola sales across the globe. The graph illustrates the Coca-cola share price during the years 1996 to 2001. Overall, Coca-cola sales are high in the America regions and the lowest in Africa region. It is also seen that coca-cola share price has fluctuations during the period. Firstly, In North America, Coca-cola sales are the highest accounting for 30. 4 percent of global sales followed by Latin America, Europe and Asia at 25. 7 percent, 20. 5 percent and 16. 4 percent respectively. Out of all regions, Africa and Middle East region has the lowest global share at 7. 0 percent. However, total global sales of coca-cola is tallied at 17. 1 billion USD during the year 2000. Secondly, Share price of coca-cola has many up and down during the period. It has the highest share price $80 during the year 1998 and the lowest $40 during the year 1996. It has seen a raise of share from $40 to $65 during 1996-97 year. Only two times when coca-cola price dropped below $50 is 1996 and 2000. At the end of 2001 share price seattled at $55.
The pie chart represents the Coca-cola
sales
across the globe. The graph illustrates the Coca-cola
share
price
during the years 1996 to 2001.

Overall
, Coca-cola
sales
are high in the America
regions
and the lowest in Africa
region
. It is
also
seen
that coca-cola
share
price
has fluctuations during the period.

Firstly
, In North America, Coca-cola
sales
are the highest accounting for 30. 4
percent
of global
sales
followed by Latin America, Europe and Asia at 25. 7
percent
, 20. 5
percent
and 16. 4
percent
respectively
. Out of all
regions
, Africa and Middle East
region
has the lowest global
share
at 7. 0
percent
.
However
, total global
sales
of coca-cola
is tallied
at 17. 1 billion USD during the
year
2000.

Secondly
,
Share
price
of coca-cola has
many
up and down during the period. It has the highest
share
price
$80 during the
year
1998 and the lowest $40 during the
year
1996. It has
seen
a raise of
share
from $40 to $65 during 1996-97
year
.
Only
two times when coca-cola
price
dropped below $50 is 1996 and 2000. At the
end
of 2001
share
price
seattled
at $55.
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