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The bar chart below shows the number of employees from the European Union in the United States (1999). Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The bar chart below shows the number of employees from the European Union in the United States (1999). Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. VrXdD
The rendered bar graph illustates the European Union people worked in the united states as a employees in the duration 1999 year along with the chart depicts five different regions in the European continent. Overall, it conspicious from the Britian people were most of the percentage employees in USA, However, the least number of employees are the French person. Explecity, the UK Job holder sere the highest number in united states it was nearly 28000. Moreover, German employees are minimal decreases rather than British, Although one quater thousand people then this there were other countries people 5000 less than german It should be stimulated at 20. 000. On the other hand, below 5000 employees. ar working from French then it should been lowest ratio all over the graph After that the barn was gradually raise and stabled at roufly 7000 employees.
The rendered bar graph
illustates
the European Union
people
worked in the
united states
as a
employees
in the duration 1999 year along with the chart depicts five
different
regions in the European continent.

Overall
, it
conspicious
from the
Britian
people
were most of the percentage
employees
in USA
,
However
, the least number of
employees
are the French person.
Explecity
, the UK Job holder sere the highest number in
united states
it was
nearly
28000.
Moreover
, German
employees
are minimal decreases
rather
than British, Although one
quater
thousand
people
then this there were other countries
people
5000 less than
german
It should
be stimulated
at 20. 000.

On the other hand
, below 5000
employees
.
ar
working from French then it should
been
lowest
ratio all over the graph After that the barn was
gradually
raise
and stabled at
roufly
7000
employees
.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the number of employees from the European Union in the United States (1999). Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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