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The given map provides information about the town of Canterbury. A new academy is construct on two preferreable sites that is choose for the school.

The given map provides information about the town of Canterbury. A new academy is construct on two preferreable sites that is choose for the school. BJ9Lp
After having a keen observation of picture, it is vivid that there is two areas are chooses for constructing the school, first is S1 in north East side of Canterbury town, which is located in the country side and 5 km away from the town centre around 7000 people live in that area. Afterwards, second place is S2 in the centre of town that is no traffic a zone in this site in front of the university and all area coverd with housing that is connected with main road and that place is 7 km away from Chatham ( population of citizens live that town is 4500 ). Overall, S1 place is best to build school, because their is a enough place is available for construction more building for the school.
After having a keen observation of picture, it is vivid that
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there is two areas
are chooses for constructing the school,
first
is S1 in north East side of Canterbury
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town
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in the country side and 5 km away from the
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town
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centre
around 7000
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people
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live
in that area. Afterwards, second
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place
is S2 in the
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centre
of
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town
that is
no traffic a zone in this site in front of the university and all area
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coverd
with housing that
is connected
with main road and that
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place
is 7 km away from
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Chatham
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(
population of citizens
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live
that
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town
is 4500
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)
.

Overall
, S1
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place
is best to build school,
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because
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is
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place
is available for construction more building for the school.
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IELTS academic The given map provides information about the town of Canterbury. A new academy is construct on two preferreable sites that is choose for the school.

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