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The given map below compare how the two university sports court changed over the years between 1990 and present.

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The given map below compare how the two university sports court changed over the years between 1990 and present. Overall, it can be clearly seen from the map that during the timeframe shown, the changes in the university sports court were noticeable with significant improvements to the infrastructure. In the West end, The basketball court has been erected on the original site of the park area. The tennis court has been relocated to the south of the university, replacing the position of the car park. In addition, the café and the reception still remain unchanged, while the outdoor pool has been converted into the indoor pool. The changing room has been become bigger and relocated in front of the fitness centre. Moreover, the fitness centre has been replaced on the initial position of the tennis court, at the back of the changing room
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map below compare how the two university sports
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court
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changed
over the years between 1990 and present.

Overall
, it can be
clearly
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seen
from the map that during the timeframe shown, the
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changes
in the university sports
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court
were noticeable with significant improvements to the infrastructure.

In the West
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end
, The basketball
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court
has
been erected
on the original site of the park area. The tennis
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court
has
been relocated
to the south of the university, replacing the position of the car park.

In addition
, the café and the reception
still
remain unchanged, while the outdoor pool has
been converted
into the indoor pool. The changing room has
been become
bigger and relocated in front of the fitness
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centre
.
Moreover
, the fitness
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centre
has
been replaced
on the initial position of the tennis
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court
, at the back of the changing room

IELTS academic The given map below compare how the two university sports court changed over the years between 1990 and present.

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