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Task 1 marriage and divorces. Write 150 words

Task 1 marriage and divorces. Write 150 words kgYwM

The included bar charts indicate the figure of marriage and divorce rate in United States, along with the adults marital status survey between 1970 and 2000. It is quite clear that, approximately half of the couples got divorced comparing with the marriage rates in the US. The majority of citizens from US were married in the years mentioned, but the percentage of single adults were higher in 2000. in 1972, 2. 5 million of Americans got married, while a million did not last anymore. the marriage rate remained stable in the next decade but dropped to 2 million by the Year 2000. in compression, the divorce rate toped in 1980. , just below 1. 5 million, and it turned back to the similar amount in 2000 as it was in 1970. Following on marital status in America, the Summit portion of people got married in 1970 which was levelled on 70% off the total Americans, while the amount decreased 10% laser in 2000. In addition, a tiny portion of couple were separated from each other in 1970 compared to the final year of graph. In contrast, the percentage of single adults was about 5% higher in 2000 where it was around 15% in 1970. Finally, widowed rate was slightly similar in both years over there throughout the graph shown.

The included bar charts indicate the figure of marriage and divorce You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rate
A determiner is probably missing here: "in the United States".in the United States
in United States
, along with the adults marital status survey between 1970 and 2000.

It is quite This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that, approximately half of the couples This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 divorced comparing with the marriage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rates
 in the US. The majority of citizens from US were married
 in the years mentioned, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the percentage of single adults were higher in 2000.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 1972, 2. 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 of Americans This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 married, while a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 did not last anymore. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 marriage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rate
 remained stable in the next
 decade This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 dropped to 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 by the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
Year
 2000. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 compression, the divorce You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rate
Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "topped", the past tense form of the verb 'top'?toppedhopedtapedtowedtoedtoned
toped
 in 1980. Loose punctuation mark.apply
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 below 1. 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
, and it turned back to the similar amount in 2000 as it was in 1970.

Following on marital status in America, the Summit portion of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 married in 1970 which was levelled
 on 70% off the total Americans, while the amount decreased 10% laser in 2000. In addition
, a tiny portion of couple were separated
 from each other in 1970 compared to the final You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 of graph. In contrast
, the percentage of single adults was about 5% higher in 2000 where it was around 15% in 1970. Finally
, widowed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rate
 was slightly
 similar in both years over there throughout the graph shown. 