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The given line graph shows visits from and to the UK between 1979 and 1999

The given line graph shows visits from and to the UK between 1979 and 1999 5a3En
The given line graph illustrates visits to and from the UK between 1979 and 1999. Overall, it is clear that visits abroad by UK residents' portion was higher than visits to the UK overseas residents. In 1979 both of them visits were with low figure. And later visits abroad by UK residents increased gradually. Untill 1985 it rised slowly and then increased a bit faster. Now, from 1979 to 1982 visits to the UK by overseas residents remained unchanged about 10 millions. And then till 1986 it raised minimally to 11 millions. Later it increased fastly nearly 24 millions. Go back informations that about visits abroad by UK residents increased till 51 millions. At first glance visits abroad by UK residents in 1979 about 11 millions and in 1999 nearly 51 millions. It climbed about five times. So, visits to the UK by overseas were lower than another one. It raised about three times.
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line graph illustrates
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to and from the UK between 1979 and 1999.
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clear
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visits
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abroad
by UK residents' portion was higher than
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visits
to the UK overseas
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residents
. In 1979 both of them
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visits
were with low figure. And later
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visits
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abroad
by UK
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residents
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increased
gradually
.
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1985 it
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slowly
and then
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a bit faster.
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Now
, from 1979 to 1982
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visits
to the UK by overseas
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residents
remained unchanged about 10
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millions
. And then till 1986 it raised
minimally
to 11
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millions
. Later it
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increased
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fastly
nearly
24
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millions
. Go back
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informations
that about
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visits
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abroad
by UK
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residents
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increased
till 51
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millions
. At
first
glance
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visits
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abroad
by UK
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residents
in 1979 about 11
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millions
and in 1999
nearly
51
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millions
. It climbed about five times.
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,
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visits
to the UK by overseas were lower than another one. It raised about three times.
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IELTS academic The given line graph shows visits from and to the UK between 1979 and 1999

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