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where manufacturers of the top 20 best-selling RX drugs spent their tv dollars in 2015

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The given pie chart illustrates details of the amount of money that the producers of the best 20 best-selling RX medicines burnt out for advertisement on television in 2015. Overall, Pharmaceutical producers of the top 20 best-selling directed almost all of their TV advertisement money on four broadcasts. They were CBS, ABC, NBC, and FOX. It’s likely no coincidence that CBS drew the most advertising dollars last year. Drug manufacturers had spent 511 million dollars for advertisement on this channel. ABC was the channel that drugs producers paid the second most to advertise their products on television. They had paid 296 million dollars to make their products appear on this channel. The two remaining channels of 4 broadcast titans, Fox and NBC, were given 250 million dollars and 128 million dollars respectively for drug advertising. Further analysis of the chart shows that four major channels of American accounted for a total of 1185 million TV dollars for medicine advertisement, while drug manufacturers paid only 607 millions dollar for the remaining channels.
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of the amount of money that the producers of the best 20 best-selling RX medicines burnt out for
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on television in 2015.

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, Pharmaceutical producers of the top 20 best-selling directed almost all of their TV
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money on four broadcasts. They were CBS, ABC, NBC, and FOX.

It’s likely no coincidence that CBS drew the most advertising
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last year.
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manufacturers had spent 511
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on this
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. ABC was the
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that
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producers paid the second most to advertise their products on television. They had paid 296
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their products appear on this
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. The two remaining
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of 4 broadcast titans, Fox and NBC, were
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250
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and 128
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respectively
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that four major
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of American accounted for a total of 1185
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TV
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for medicine
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, while
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manufacturers paid
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IELTS academic where manufacturers of the top 20 best-selling RX drugs spent their tv dollars in 2015

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