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International Student Enrolments Numbers: De Salle University

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The line graph illustrates the thousands of international student enrolments from India, Vietnam, Nepal, Indonesia and Colombia at De Salle University during 1980 to 2020. Overall, there was an increase in enrolments of the students from all countries, with Indian students enrolled the most. In 1980, enrolment numbers still relatively low in every country, with the number equal or lower than 1000. At the beginning of 1990, Indian student enrolments began to increase rapidly while the others still clung together. By 2000, Indian student enrolments rocketed from 5000 to 15000. Throughout 2000s and 2010s, Vietnam, Nepal, Indonesia had relatively similar number of enrolments, which can be ranked from Indonesia, Vietnam, and Nepal respectively. In 2010, Vietnam and Nepal started to increase dramatically, leading them eventually had more enrolment numbers than Indonesia had in 2020. However, Colombia continued to climb gradually from 1980 onwards, but it still remained relatively lower than others countries.
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from India, Vietnam, Nepal, Indonesia and Colombia at
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University during 1980 to 2020.
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, there was an increase in
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of the
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from all countries, with Indian
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enrolled the most.

In 1980,
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still
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low in every country, with the
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equal or lower than 1000. At the beginning of 1990, Indian
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began to increase
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rocketed from 5000 to 15000.

Throughout 2000s and 2010s, Vietnam, Nepal, Indonesia had
relatively
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, which can
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from Indonesia, Vietnam, and Nepal
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than Indonesia had in 2020.
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