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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram provides the process of instant noodles production. It shows where its stored, the mixing process, how the dough turned into discs until the process of labeling and sealing. In general, this process involves 8 different steps until the packaging of the noodles. Additionally, the process must be continuous in each step to ensure the consistency of the production. The initial step for the production describes that the flour stored in storage silos before the mixing process of water, oil, and flour takes place. After the mixing process completed, the ingredients rolled using rollers to make it become a dough before passed to dough sheets to process the dough into the next step. The next process changes the dough shape which previously a thin film shape to a strips shape. Moving on to the next step, which includes the last modification of the dough from strips to a noodle disc. After the modification process, cooking oil added to the noodle and the drying phase take place. The noodles now ready to place inside the cups together with the vegetables and spices for the instant noodles. The last compartment of the machine responsible for the packaging of the noodle cups.
The diagram provides the
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of instant
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noodles
production. It
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shows
where its stored, the mixing
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process
, how the
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dough
turned into discs until the
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process
of labeling and sealing.

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, this
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process
involves 8
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different
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steps
until the packaging of the
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noodles
.
Additionally
, the
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process
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must
be continuous in each
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step
to ensure the consistency of the production.

The initial
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step
for the production
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describes
that the flour stored in storage silos
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before
the mixing
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process
of water, oil, and flour takes place. After the mixing
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process
completed, the ingredients rolled using rollers to
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make
it become a
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dough
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before
passed to
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dough
sheets to
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process
the
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dough
into the
next
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step
. The
next
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process
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changes
the
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shape which previously a thin film shape to a strips shape.

Moving on to the
next
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step
, which includes the last modification of the
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dough
from strips to a
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noodle
disc. After the modification
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, cooking oil
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added
to the
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noodle
and the drying phase take place. The
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noodles
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now
ready to place inside the cups together with the vegetables and spices for the instant
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noodles
. The last compartment of the machine responsible for the packaging of the
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cups.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Academic
  American English
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200 words
6.0
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