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The given line graph illustrates the proportion of Australian products distributed to four countries over 22 years.

The given line graph illustrates the proportion of Australian products distributed to four countries over 22 years. MqB1o

The given line graph illustrates the proportion of Australian products distributed to four countries over 22 years. Almost all Chinese and Indian citizens had consumed goods from Australia over a period, especially China which reached the top. Whereas, the US and Japan saw a moderate decline in commodities imported from Australia. Firstly, although China received only a mere 5% in 1990, it was the leading export the market of Australian stocks disseminating over less than a third after over 2 decades. Whereas, there was a dramatic decline in Japanese substances which from nearly 25% to below 20% in 5 years, followed by a minimal dip. Moreover, there was only 10% of Australia's exports to the US, 10 times as much as that of India in 1990. Over the following 22 years, both of which fluctuated and dropped to around 5% in 2012.

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given
 line graph illustrates the proportion of Australian products distributed to four countries You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
over
 22 years.

Almost all Chinese and Indian citizens had consumed This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 from Australia You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
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 a period, especially
 China which reached the top. Whereas, the US and Japan This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a moderate decline in commodities imported from Australia.

Firstly
, although China received This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 a mere 5% in 1990, it was the leading export the market of Australian stocks disseminating You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
over
 less than a third after You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
over
 2 decades. Whereas, there was a dramatic decline in Japanese substances which from nearly
 25% to below 20% in 5 years, followed by a minimal dip.

Moreover
, there was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 10% of Australia's exports to the US, 10 times as much as that of India in 1990. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
Over
 the following 22 years, both of which fluctuated and dropped to around 5% in 2012. 