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The given line graph illustrates the number of goods transported in United Kindom by four different modes of transport from 1974 to 2002

The given line graph illustrates the number of goods transported in United Kindom by four different modes of transport from 1974 to 2002 qapl5
The given line graph illustrates the number of goods transported in United Kindom by four different modes of transport from 1974 to 2002 Overall, the amount of goods which was transported by road, water, and rail was witnessed a fluctuation while the number of goods which transported by pipeline increased slightly. From 1974 to 1982 a gradual growth was witnessed for the number of stock transported by pipeline from 2 million tonnes in 1974 to around 18 million in 1982. In the next period from 1982 to 1989, this statistic stood at approximately 8 million and increased to 19 million in 1990. The statistic continued increasing to over 20 million in 1994 and did not change to 2002. Between 1974 and 1978 the number of goods transported by water and rail around the same at about 40 million in 1974 and 39 million in 1978, while the number of goods transported by the road at the same time was nearly 70 million in 1974 and increased to 72 million in 1978. From 1978 to 1998 the figure for the goods which was transported by the road was experienced a fluctuation from 72 million in 1978 to around 98 million in 1998, and this figure minimally rose to 99 million in 2002. From 1978 to 1998 the number of goods transported by water increased to 50 million in 1998, in the contrast, the amount of stock transported by rail was seen a downward trend from around 40 million in 1978 to 36 million in 1998. In the last period from 1998 to 2002 was witnessed an increase of both water and rail with the former grew to above 60 million and the latter above 40 million.
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IELTS academic The given line graph illustrates the number of goods transported in United Kindom by four different modes of transport from 1974 to 2002

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