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The given line graph illustrates information about how many three different species of birds: kingfisher, black beak pelican and flamingo were observed at Bharatpur Bird Sanctuary over a fourteen-year period between 2001 and 2014

The given line graph illustrates information about how many three different species of birds: kingfisher, black beak pelican and flamingo were observed at Bharatpur Bird Sanctuary over a fourteen-year period between 2001 and 2014. Overall, three surveyed items followed an upward trend and flamingo reached the highest count throughout the years. To start with, in 2001, the number of flamingo was the most highest for 3000 while black beak pelican and kingfisher were 1000, 200 respectively. Over the period of 2 years from 2001 the number of flamingo experienced went up moderately to 5k meanwhile black beak pelican rose to 3k. Then, both figures continued to increased steeply to 7k for black beak pelican and 9k for flamingo. over the next 9 years, the flamingo remained steady at 7k before rising to hit the peak of 12k and became the leading birds over the time surveyed while there was a mild decrease to 6k in the number of black beak pelican and followed by increasing partially to 7, 5k in 2014 On the other hand, the number of kingfisher was the least in comparison with 2 other items with just 100 in 2001. After that, the data increased minimally by 100 from 100 to 200 in 2003. Over a period of 11 years from 2003, there was a gradual growth of 4000 to its record high at 4200 but still accounted for the minority of the number of birds sighted at Bharatpur Bird Sanctuary in 2014. Overall, three surveyed items followed an upward trend and flamingo reached the highest count throughout the years. To start with, in 2001, the number of flamingo was the most highest for 3000 while black beak pelican and kingfisher were 1000, 200 respectively. Over the period of 2 years from 2001 the number of flamingo experienced went up moderately to 5k meanwhile black beak pelican rose to 3k. Then, both figures continued to increased steeply to 7k for black beak pelican and 9k for flamingo. over the next 9 years, the flamingo remained steady at 7k before rising to hit the peak of 12k and became the leading birds over the time surveyed while there was a mild decrease to 6k in the number of black beak pelican and followed by increasing partially to 7, 5k in 2014 On the other hand, the number of kingfisher was the least in comparison with 2 other items with just 100 in 2001. After that, the data increased minimally by 100 from 100 to 200 in 2003. Over a period of 11 years from 2003, there was a gradual growth of 4000 to its record high at 4200 but still accounted for the minority of the number of birds sighted at Bharatpur Bird Sanctuary in 2014

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