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As a general trend, there is an upward trend in households that are owned accommodation, as opposed to have rented houses that presented a decline.

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The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of owned and leased in there UK and Wales from 1918 to 2011. As a general trend, there is an upward trend in households that are owned accommodation, as opposed to have rented houses that presented a decline. In 1918, the figure of households in rented accommodation was nearly up to 80% the percentage of the households in owned accommodation was below 30%. The number of families owning their homes increased gradually until it reached 50%, which was equal proportion of rented accommodation. There was 10% increase in the proportion of ownership from 1971 to 1981. It continued to rise over the following years and by 2001, about 70%, then over the next ten years decreased slightly and reached to about 63%. In 1939, rentals reached 69% and remind steady until 1953 before falling to 59% in 1961. Rate of rentals declined to 31% and there was a small rebound that bucked to roughly 35% in 2011.
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bar chart illustrates the proportion of
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owned
and leased in there UK and Wales from 1918 to 2011. As a general trend, there is an upward trend in households that are
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owned
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accommodation
, as opposed to have rented
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houses
that presented a decline.

In 1918, the figure of households in rented
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accommodation
was
nearly
up to 80% the percentage of the households in
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owned
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was below 30%. The number of families owning their homes increased
gradually
until it reached 50%, which was equal proportion of rented
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accommodation
. There was 10% increase in the proportion of ownership from 1971 to 1981. It continued to rise over the following years and by 2001, about 70%, then over the
next
ten years decreased
slightly
and reached to about 63%.

In 1939, rentals reached 69% and remind steady until 1953
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falling to 59% in 1961. Rate of rentals declined to 31% and there was a
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rebound that bucked to roughly 35% in 2011.
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IELTS academic As a general trend, there is an upward trend in households that are owned accommodation, as opposed to have rented houses that presented a decline.

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