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1. In what ways are human different from other animal?

1. In what ways are human different from other animal? 3bDJn
As you know, on earth there are about 7. 7 million species of animals. However, the human race is separate. We have many differences compared to other animals. First, people have their own civilization, they know how to work and especially can create materials to meet living needs. Therefore, humans know how to work, not too dependent on nature like other animals. Secondly, humans have voice, writing and abstract thinking and have been able to form consciousness. In conclusion, these are the differences between humans and other animals, by which it is possible to know that man is the most evolved species on earth
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race is separate. We have
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civilization, they
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how to work and
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can create materials to
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meet
living needs.
Therefore
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humans
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how to work, not too dependent on nature like other
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animals
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have voice, writing and abstract thinking and have been able to form consciousness.
In conclusion
, these are the differences between
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and other
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animals
, by which it is possible to
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is the most evolved species on
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IELTS academic 1. In what ways are human different from other animal?

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