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The given bar chart depicts the amount of expenditure of two different European countries which spent on goods in 2010.

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The given bar chart depicts the amount of expenditure of two different European countries which spent on goods in 2010. Units are measured by pounds Overall, it can be easily seen that the figure for cars completely occupied the rest of the goods. While a striking interesting of this bar chart is that perfume witnessed a humble figure in both countries. To begin with, in the UK, cars registered a great deal of number, which was exactly 450, 000 pounds compared to accurately 400, 000 pounds in France. According to books in the UK, people spent as opposed to France, which over 400, 000 pounds and 300, 000 pounds respectively. As for the number of pounds of cameras, the UK accounts for 400, 000 pounds, which was higher than over 200, 000 pounds in the expenditure on books in France. Regarding Computers, France witnessed approximately 375, 000 pounds while the figure for the UK was 300, 000 pounds. Reference to Perfume, the figure for pounds in the UK was lower than France over 50, 000 pounds.

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 in both countries.

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. As for the number of pounds of cameras, the UK accounts for 400, 000 pounds, which was higher than over 200, 000 pounds in the expenditure on books in France.

Regarding Computers, France witnessed approximately 375, 000 pounds while the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpricecharacterratenumbersymbolamount
figure
 for the UK was 300, 000 pounds. Reference to Perfume, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpricecharacterratenumbersymbolamount
figure
 for pounds in the UK was lower than France over 50, 000 pounds. 