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The given line graph depicts information about how many foreigners visited to the three separate regions in an European nation, during the span of a 20-yeaar period from 1987 to 2007

The given line graph depicts information about how many foreigners visited to the three separate regions in an European nation, during the span of a 20-yeaar period from 1987 to 2007 payQL
The provided chart reveals how many foreigners visited to three distinct regions in an European nation from 1987 to 2007. As can be seen from the chart, the number of foreign tourists visited to the coast witnessed a significant increase, while the similar was true for that of the lakes and there was a gradual increase for the mountains. In 1987, the level of foreigners visited to the coast was 40, 000, in comparison with 20, 000 for the mountains and 10, 000 for the lakes. Over the next ten years, the figure for foreigners visited to the lakes increased significantly to about 50, 000, while the number of foreign tourists visited to the mountains witnessed a gradual increase to around 30, 000. At the same period, the volume of foreign tourists witnessed a slight fluctuation around 50, 000. In 1997, the number of foreigners visited to the coast and the lakes were almost the same, at around 55, 000. From the year 1997 onwards, After reaching a peak of 75, 000 in 2002, the figure for foreigners visited to the lakes dropped considerably of around 25, 000 in 2007. At the same period, the volume of foreigners visited to the coast increased significantly and reached the highest point of 75, 000 in 2007, while the number of foreign tourists went up gradually.
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IELTS academic The given line graph depicts information about how many foreigners visited to the three separate regions in an European nation, during the span of a 20-yeaar period from 1987 to 2007

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