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The given line graph compares the percentage of people who used internet in USA, Canada and Mexico between 1999 to 2009.

The given line graph compares the percentage of people who used internet in USA, Canada and Mexico between 1999 to 2009. Overall, it is clear that all the countries showed a significant increase in the number of internet users. However, Canada and America had the similar trend with few differences although Canada had traversed USA in terms of internet user by the end of the period and attained the highest percentage. Mexico, on the other hand, despite growing, could not attained considerable percentage in term of internet users. In 1999, the percentage of internet users in USA, Canada and Mexico stood at 20, 10 and 5 percentages respectively. From 1999 to 2003, in Canada, the number of internet users rose dramatically to around 50% and crossed USA. However, despite the steady growth, USA could not match the numbers with Canada until 2004 and followed by the year of 2007 Canada and USA had the same internet users. In 2009, Canada, the percentage of internet users reached a peak of 100%. Mexico, since the beginning, had the consistent growth until 2001 and after that, it rose significantly until 2005 and became steady at the end of the period

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 line graph compares the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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used
 internet A determiner is probably missing here: “in the USA”.in the USA
in USA
, Canada and Mexico After “between”, use “and”, not “to”.between 1999 and 2009
between 1999 to 2009
.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that all the countries This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 a significant increase in the number of internet You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbuyershopperpurchaser
users
. However
, Canada and America had the similar trend with few differences although Canada had traversed USA in terms of internet You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbuyershopperpurchaser
user
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end
 of the period and attained the highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
. Mexico, on the other hand
, despite growing, could not The modal verb ‘could’ requires the verb’s base form.attain
attained
 considerable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
Did you mean the commonly used phrase “in terms of”?in terms of
in term of
 internet users.

In 1999, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 of internet You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbuyershopperpurchaser
users
A determiner is probably missing here: “in the USA”.in the USA
in USA
, Canada and Mexico stood at 20, 10 and 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentages
respectively
. From 1999 to 2003, in Canada, the number of internet You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbuyershopperpurchaser
users
 rose dramatically
 to around 50% and crossed USA. However
, despite the steady growth, USA could not match the numbers with Canada until 2004 and followed by the year of 2007 Canada and USA had the same internet You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbuyershopperpurchaser
users
. In 2009, Canada, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 of internet You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbuyershopperpurchaser
users
 reached a peak of 100%.

Mexico, since the beginning, had the consistent growth until 2001 and after that, it rose significantly
 until 2005 and became steady at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period