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The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below You should write at least 150 words.

The first chart illustrate the different reasons for why 100000 UK citizens chose to travel abroad during a period of five years from 1994 to 1998. However, the second chart represent number of travelers in each of the following destinations: Western Europe, North America and Other Areas. Overall, from the first chart it can be seen that most people decided to travel abroad to spend their holidays in rural areas. Nonetheless, the least number of people chose other reason different from holiday, business or visiting friends and relatives. Moreover, looking at the second chart, Western Europe was the most common destination for the UK residents whereas North America was the least one. Firstly, from chart one in 1994, 15246 people chose holidays as their reason for travelling, 3155 chose business and 2689 chose visting friends and relatives while on the contrary the rest chose other reasons. Nevertheless, those numbers increased over the years to reach in 1998 20700 for holidays whereas at that year an approximetly same number of people (between 3000 and 4000) chose business and visiting friennds as their reason. Finally, the rest (around 990) chose other reason. In terms of destinations, it can be acknowleged from chart 2 that in 1994 merly under 20000 people traveled to Wester Europe. However, a number much less than that chose North America and other areas respectively both numbers between 0 and 5000. Over the years although people choosing North America and other regions increased yet the stayed in the same interval as 1994. On the other hand the number of travelers to Western Europe increased to reach merly under 25000.
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different
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reasons
for why 100000 UK citizens
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chose
to travel abroad during a period of five years from 1994 to 1998.
However
, the second
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represent
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number
of travelers in each of the following destinations: Western Europe,
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America and
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it can be
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that most
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people
decided to travel abroad to spend their
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holidays
in rural areas. Nonetheless, the least
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number
of
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people
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holiday
, business or visiting friends and relatives.
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, looking at the second
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, Western Europe was the most common destination for the UK residents whereas
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America was the least one.

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one in 1994, 15246
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holidays
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for travelling, 3155
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business and 2689
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reasons
.
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increased over the years to reach in 1998 20700 for
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whereas

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of
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people
(between 3000 and 4000)
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chose
business and visiting
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as their
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In terms of destinations, it can be
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2 that in 1994
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merly
under 20000
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people
traveled to Wester Europe.
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number
much less than that
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chose
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North
America and
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areas
respectively
both
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between 0 and 5000. Over the years although
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choosing
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North
America and
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other
regions increased
yet
the stayed in the same interval as 1994. On the
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other
hand the
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number
of travelers to Western Europe increased to reach
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merly
under 25000.
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IELTS academic The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100, 000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

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  American English
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270 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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