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The graph provides information about measurements of the wheat that _is_ exported in millions of tonnes from three distinct regions -Canada, Australia and, European Community - over the five years from1985 to 1990.

The graph provides information about measurements of the wheat that _is_ exported in millions of tonnes from three distinct regions -Canada, Australia and, European Community - over the five years from1985 to 1990. Overall, although Canada exported slightly more wheat than the others, there wasn’t a steady _rise_ in _this_ period of time. It started to export almost 20 million tonnes of wheat in 1985 then the figure fell slightly _over the next year but_ wheat export rose dramatically for the _following_ two years. _As regards_ Australia pattern, it was reversed between 1985 and 1988. Wheat exports of European Community fluctuated gradually over these five years. At first there was a gradual decline in the quantity of _exported_ wheat but it rose slightly to 20 million tonnes. In general, export of wheat in Canada was a little more than the other two areas between 1985 and 1990.
The graph provides information about measurements of the
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wheat
that _is_ exported in millions of tonnes from three distinct regions -Canada, Australia and, European Community
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over the five years from1985 to 1990.

Overall
, although Canada exported
slightly
more
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wheat
than the others, there wasn’t a steady _rise_ in _this_ period of time.

It
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started
to
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export
almost 20 million tonnes of
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wheat
in 1985 then the figure fell
slightly
_over the
next
year but_
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wheat
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export
rose
dramatically
for the _following_ two years.

_As regards_ Australia pattern, it
was reversed
between 1985 and
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1988. Wheat
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exports
of European Community fluctuated
gradually
over these five years. At
first
there was a gradual decline in the quantity of _exported_
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wheat
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but
it rose
slightly
to 20 million tonnes.

In general
,
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export
of
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wheat
in Canada was a
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little
more than the other two areas between 1985 and 1990.
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IELTS academic The graph provides information about measurements of the wheat that _is_ exported in millions of tonnes from three distinct regions -Canada, Australia and, European Community - over the five years from1985 to 1990.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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