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The given line graph compares foreign visitors’ number to three various field in a European country for a period of 20 years between 1987 and 2007

The given line graph compares foreign visitors’ number to three various field in a European country for a period of 20 years between 1987 and 2007 VY8MK

The given line graph compares foreign visitors’ number to three various field in a European country for a period of 20 years between 1987 and 2007 Looking at the chart, it can be seen clearly that there were fluctuations in both overseas visitors to three areas. In 1987, the number of visitors to the coast was the highest at 40 thousand, the number of people visiting the lakes accounted for the lowest proportion with 10 thousand. The mountains are the area where the number of tourists visit accounts for 20 thousand, the second highest proportion. During the first five years of the chart, the number of international visitors to the coast dropped from 40 thousand to nearly 35 thousand. There was a steady increase over the next 15 years and reached 75 thousand guesses in 2007. Visiting the lakes was an area that saw a steady increase in tourist numbers in the first 10 years and a significant increase between 1997 and 2020. Over the next five years, there was a sharp decline in the number of foreign visitors, and achieved 50 thousand in the final year. There was a slight increase in the number of visitors to the mountains, even from 1997 to 2002 this number remained relatively and got 35 thousand guesses in 2007.

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 line graph compares foreign You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitors’
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number
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 in a European country for a period of 20 years between 1987 and 2007

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seen
clearly
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visitors
 to three areas.

In 1987, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitors
 to the coast was the highest at 40 thousand, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
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people
 visiting the lakes accounted for the lowest proportion with 10 thousand. The mountains are the area where the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of tourists visit accounts for 20 thousand, the second highest proportion.

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 five years of the chart, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of international You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitors
 to the coast dropped from 40 thousand to nearly
 35 thousand. There was a steady You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentraisemergerhikeriseupsurge
increase
 over the next
 15 years and reached 75 thousand guesses in 2007. Visiting the lakes was an area that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a steady You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentraisemergerhikeriseupsurge
increase
 in tourist You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
 in the first
 10 years and a significant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentraisemergerhikeriseupsurge
increase
 between 1997 and 2020. Over the next
 five years, there was a sharp decline in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of foreign You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitors
, and achieved 50 thousand in the final You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
. There was a slight You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentraisemergerhikeriseupsurge
increase
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitors
 to the mountains, even from 1997 to 2002 this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 remained relatively
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 35 thousand guesses in 2007. 