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The given illustration depicts the data on findings of the survey about drinking habits in five Australian cities as they related to coffee and tea in percentages in last four weeks.

The given illustration depicts the data on findings of the survey about drinking habits in five Australian cities as they related to coffee and tea in percentages in last four weeks. b3BGY
Overall, what stands out from the chart is that going to a café for tea and coffee is dominant in all cities while the least people bought fresh coffee in this period. As can be reflected from the chart, nearly 35% of inhabitants in Brisbane and Adelaide purchased fresh coffee while approximately 43% of people in Sydney bought this drink. Instant coffee consumption of the residents ranged from 45% to 55% in all cities. It can be clearly seen from the chart that most people went to café or restaurants for coffee or tea. Residents of Melbourne are on the top of this trend(nearly 63%). By contrast, only 49% of people in Adelaide went to café to drink some hot beverages
Overall
, what stands out from the chart is that going to a café for tea and
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coffee
is dominant in all cities while the least
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people
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bought
fresh
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coffee
in this period.

As can
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from the chart,
nearly
35% of inhabitants in Brisbane and Adelaide
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purchased
fresh
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coffee
while approximately 43% of
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people
in Sydney
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bought
this drink. Instant
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coffee
consumption of the residents ranged from 45% to 55% in all cities. It can be
clearly
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seen
from the chart that most
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people
went to café or restaurants for
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coffee
or tea. Residents of Melbourne are on the top of this trend(
nearly
63%). By contrast,
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only
49% of
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people
in Adelaide went to café to drink
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some
hot
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beverages
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IELTS academic The given illustration depicts the data on findings of the survey about drinking habits in five Australian cities as they related to coffee and tea in percentages in last four weeks.

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