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Olympic Statistics Report

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The chart below shows stats of the Olympics Medals with comparison data amongst various other countries. Leading the chart is the land of opportunities United States of America whereby the highest number of medals achieved by them in all of the categories Gold, Silver and Bronze). Leaving behind 11 countries which subsequently followed by the race of winning and accomplishing for their country. According to the chart, China won the least amount of medals as compared to the others with only less than 500 medals in total. On the other hand, the Soviet Union managed to hit the mark of 1000 bronze medals, 500 silver and 400 gold medals.
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stats of the Olympics
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with comparison data amongst various other countries. Leading the chart is the land of opportunities United States of America whereby the highest number of
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achieved by them in
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categories Gold, Silver and Bronze
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. Leaving behind 11 countries which
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followed by the race of winning and accomplishing for their country. According to the chart, China won the least amount of
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medals
as compared to the others with
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less than 500
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, 500 silver and 400 gold
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IELTS academic Olympic Statistics Report

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