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Different Types of Crime in England and Wales From 1970 to 2005

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1. 2 The line graph shows how many travelers went to 3 various museums in London over a period of 4 months in 2013. It is clear that while the number of visitors travelling to Natural History Museum went down, the opposite trend was observed in the statistics of the other two museums. In addition, it is remarkable that British Museum was most attractive over the period provided. In June, there were 600 thousand visitors who went to British Museum, which was higher than the figures for Natural History Museum and Science Museum, at 550 thousand and 400 thousand respectively. From that time onwards, The number of travelers to British Museum peaked at 750 thousand in July, before a significant drop of 250 thousand in August. This data continued to grow gradually to 650 thousand in September. Meanwhile, both the figures for Natural History Museum and Science Museum experienced a similar trend which declined to about 380 thousand and 300 thousand in August respectively, after which all of them had a significant rise to the same point of 450 thousand in the following month. 1. 3 The line graph gives information about the number of 3 types of illegal activities in England and Wales between 1970 and 2005. Overall, we can see immediately that there was an upward trend in all three types of crime. Furthermore, it is apparent that the crimes which is related to car theft was always higher than the other two throughout the entire period given. During first 26-year period from 1970 to 1995, the data of street robberies started from nearly 0. 1 milion and then remained stable at that point. Besides that, the figures for car thefts and house burglaries experienced a similar trend with significant increases to 1 million and 0. 7 million respectively in 1990. Between 1990 and 1995, while the statistics of stealing car surged to a peak of 1. 6 million, the figure for burglary in house experienced a period of stability. From 1995 to the rest, the amount of car larceny began to fall to 1. 4 million in 2000 and continued decrease by 0. 6 milion 5 years later. The data of house burgling also went down moderatly to 0. 6 million and 0. 4 million, in 1995 and 2000 respectively. An opposite trend was seen in the figures for street robbery, which had a slight icrease to 0. 2 milion in the last 10 years.
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