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The given horizontal bar graph depicts the information about Someland’s primary sales in the year 2005 and 2015, and the estimate of the export for the upcoming year- 2025.

The given horizontal bar graph depicts the information about Someland’s primary sales in the year 2005 and 2015, and the estimate of the export for the upcoming year- 2025. r8Aln
The given horizontal bar graph depicts the information about Someland’s primary sales in the year 2005 and 2015, and the estimate of the export for the upcoming year- 2025. The data is calibrated in terms of USD billion for international tourism and meat and dairy products. Among the three industries, international tourism was the greatest export in the year 2005 holding a revenue of approximately 6 billion USD. It proves to be a prominent field with a substantial growth over the period of years reaching almost 7 billion in the year 2015 and in the future, it is computed to grow to nearly 8 billion USD. Contrary to this, there is a continual fall in meat trade from about 4 billion USD to 3. 5 billion USD over a span of 10 years from 2005. It is expected that the sales will continue to dip in the future too. However, dairy products being another major industry in Someland show a drastic boom in the exports contributing to as good as 5 billion USD in the year 2005 and increasing up to a substantial 8 billion USD in the year 2015. It is predicted that the sale may fall slightly, still being marginally high at about 7. 5 billion USD in the year 2025. Overall, it can be said that international tourism and dairy exports contribute considerably to Someland’s economy while meat products sale continues to decline over 20 years.
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2005 and 2015, and the estimate of the
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2025. The data
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in terms of USD
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billion
for international tourism and meat and dairy products.

Among the three industries, international tourism was the greatest
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export
in the
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2005 holding a revenue of approximately 6
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billion
USD. It proves to be a prominent field with a substantial growth over the period of years reaching almost 7
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billion
in the
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2015 and in the future, it
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USD to 3. 5
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USD over a span of 10 years from 2005. It is
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Someland
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2005 and increasing up to a substantial 8
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2015. It
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Someland
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