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The given graph the main sources of energy for USA in 1980 and 1990

the pie charts provides information about energy production from different major source in two years. It is clear that the most sidnificant sources of enerdy were oil and natural gas. while the most least of percentage of energy, which were hydroelectric power and nuclear power, It can be seen that oil comprised of slightly more than two fifths in the first year and figure showed only very more decrease of about a third. Likewise, natural gas made up 26 %, which went down marginally to one quarter during a docade year. It is interested in to note that there was approximate 5 % growth in production from both coal and nuclear power to 22% and one in ten percent respectively. Hydroelectric power, was only source of energy, which unchanged in 5 %
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pie charts provides information about energy production from
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major source in two years.

It is
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clear
that the most
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sidnificant
sources of
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enerdy
were oil and natural gas.
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while
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most least
of percentage of energy, which were hydroelectric power and nuclear power,

It can be
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seen
that oil comprised of
slightly
more than two fifths in the
first
year and figure
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showed
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only
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very
more decrease of about a third.
Likewise
, natural gas made up 26 %, which went down
marginally
to one quarter during a
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docade
year.

It
is interested
in to note that there was approximate 5 % growth in production from both coal and nuclear power to 22% and one in ten percent
respectively
. Hydroelectric power, was
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only
source of energy, which unchanged in 5 %
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IELTS academic The given graph the main sources of energy for USA in 1980 and 1990

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