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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given bar chart shows that top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. In 2014, China being the highest production of electricity which is 5, 398 kwh and highest consumption of electricity which 5, 322 kwh. The production and consumption of electricity by China is difference by 76 kWh which is good. In 2014, Korea Rep is the lowest in production which 485. 1 kWh and consumption which is 449. 5 kWh. In third rank is Russia the production and consumption of electricity is not much difference. Brazil, being the richest country in water resources still not able the natural resources properly. In 2014, the production which is 530. 7 kWh and consumption is 455. 8 kWh of electricity by Brazil. This country can trade electricity and can uplift the economic condition of the country. In 2014, Germany is the only country from the top ten listed which consumption is higher than production of electricity. The production is 526. 6 kWh and consumption 582. 5 kWh of electricity by Germany. In short, China is highest and Korea Rep is lowest for the production and consumption electricity in 2014. In 2014, United States, Russia, Japan, India, Canda, France and Brazil the production is high than consumption of electricity whereas Germany the consumption is high than production of electricity.
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