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The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

The pie charts compare the percentages of British pupils at one institute in England who are multilingual apart from English in two years. It is measured in percentages. Overall, it is clear that the highest proportion of language, which spoken by students, was Spanish; however, German language speakers were the lowest, but exactly the same, in both years. In terms of Spanish, it was 30% in 2000; it increased slightly in 2010, and reached to 35%. Furthermore, another language also increased significantly in 2010, as compared to 2000, which were represented 15% to 20%. Moreover, two other languages also rose minimally and reached from 10% to 15%. With regard to no other language and French, both of them decreased marginally from 20% and 15% sequentially to 10%. Hence, people who speak German language remained same in both years accounted for 10%.
The pie charts compare the percentages of British pupils at one institute in England who are multilingual apart from English in two years. It
is measured
in percentages.

Overall
, it is
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that the highest proportion of
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language
, which spoken by students, was Spanish;
however
, German
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language
speakers were the lowest,
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exactly the same, in both years.

In terms of Spanish, it was 30% in 2000; it increased
slightly
in 2010, and reached to 35%.
Furthermore
, another
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language
also
increased
significantly
in 2010, as compared to 2000, which
were represented
15% to 20%.
Moreover
, two other
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languages
also
rose
minimally
and reached from 10% to 15%.

With regard to no other
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language
and French, both of them decreased
marginally
from 20% and 15%
sequentially
to 10%.
Hence
,
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people
who speak German
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remained same in both years accounted for 10%.
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