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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

The chart gives information about what undergraduates do after completing their Antrophology graduates from one University. The given table illustrates the anthropologists’ wages at work in the following 5 years. Overall, the destination of anthropology graduates from a university experiense highest full-time work comared to other 5 types. The highest and lowest salaries of anthropology graduates is from government sector and private companies relatively. Antrophology graduates from one University did more than half of the other parts, 52% full-time work, while postgraduates full-time work was merely 8%. The lowest amount was 5% for anthropology postgraduate study when part time work of graduates tripled the number. In the regard to salaries of Anthropology graduates, Private companies gives the 10%, highest wage for 25. 000$-49. 000$. For the next years freelance consultants surpass other type of empoyment and provide graduates with 40% for the salary of 75. 000-99. 999$. In the following 5 years graduates of anthropology get 40 % and 50% wage for 100. 000$ according to the freelance consultants and government sectors relatively.
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experiense
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anthropology
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Antrophology
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from one University did more than half of the other parts, 52% full-time
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work
, while postgraduates full-time
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was
merely
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anthropology
postgraduate study when
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part time
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work
of
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tripled the number.

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Anthropology
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, Private
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gives the 10%,
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highest
wage for 25.
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000$
. For the
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empoyment
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graduates
with 40% for the salary of 75. 000-99.
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999$
. In the following 5 years
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get
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IELTS academic The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

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