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the given graph shows the number of people using the London underground station.write a report by making comparison where relevant and reporting the features.

the given graph shows the number of people using the London underground station. write a report by making comparison where relevant and reporting the features. ld0QW
The given chart demonstrates the proportion of passengers who are using the London underground station over the course of the day. From an overall perspective, it is noticeable that the majority of people are consuming the service at 8. 00 as well as 18. 30, whereas, the off-peak periods for the underground station are 6. 00 and 16. 00. According to the graph, the normal movements at the station start at 6. 00 with only an average of 100 people, after that, it encounters a sharp increase at 8. 00 with about 400 people. However, after the peak period, the station depicts a significant decrease in the passenger's utilization of the service. The people of London shows a fluctuating pattern in enjoying the underground station except for the time period between 12. 00 and 14. 00, though after 14. 00, the station faces a notable downward trend, that continues for 16. 00. Afterwards, the public again show the upward demand up to 8. 00. Although, very insignificant movements can be recorded from 20. 00 to 22. 00. To conclude, It is seen that, a maximum number of people like to use the station while going for work other activities along with when they come from these places to home.
The
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chart demonstrates the proportion of passengers who are using the London underground
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station
over the course of the day.

From an
overall
perspective, it is noticeable that the majority of
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people
are consuming the service at 8. 00
as well
as 18. 30, whereas, the off-peak periods for the underground
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station
are 6. 00 and 16. 00.

According to the graph, the normal movements at the
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station
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start
at 6. 00 with
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only
an average of 100
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people
, after that, it encounters a sharp increase at 8. 00 with about 400
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people
.
However
, after the peak period, the
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station
depicts a significant decrease in the passenger's utilization of the service. The
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people
of London
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shows
a fluctuating pattern in enjoying the underground
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station
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except for
the time period between 12. 00 and 14. 00, though after 14.
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00
, the
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station
faces a notable downward trend, that continues for 16. 00. Afterwards, the public again
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show
the upward demand up to 8. 00.
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Although
,
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insignificant movements can
be recorded
from 20. 00 to 22. 00.

To conclude
, It is
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seen
that, a maximum number of
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people
like to
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use
the
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station
while going for work other activities along with when they
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come
from these places to home.
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IELTS academic the given graph shows the number of people using the London underground station. write a report by making comparison where relevant and reporting the features.

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