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The maps show Pancha Village in 2005 and 2015.

The maps show Pancha Village in 2005 and 2015. APxMl
The given two maps describe the comparison of Pancha village in the years of 2005 and 2015. Overall, it can be observed that over the period, a huge transformation has taken in every territories of the place. The most important change was the conversion of road to the main way with governmental road signs. There was also an increase total number of markets from 5 in 2005 to 8 in 2015. It can be shown that a 2 of accommodations which were in the nearly center of village was demolished. Telephone poles and telecommunication towards continued working in 2015. It is considered that in 2005, village did not possess electric energy, however, by 2015 they have been constructed along highway. The territory of primary school was adapted to both primary and secondary schools that were situated in the northeast side of map. Pagoda in the southeast of area expanded and new additional buildings were built during 10 years.
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Pancha
village in the years of 2005 and 2015.

Overall
, it can
be observed
that over the period, a huge transformation has taken in every
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territories
of the place.

The most
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important
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change
was the conversion of road to the main way with governmental road signs. There was
also
an increase total number of markets from 5 in 2005 to 8 in 2015. It can
be shown
that a 2 of accommodations which were in the
nearly
center of village
was demolished
. Telephone poles and telecommunication towards continued working in 2015.

It
is considered
that in 2005, village did not possess electric energy,
however
, by 2015 they have
been constructed
along highway. The territory of primary school
was adapted
to both primary and secondary schools that
were situated
in the northeast side of map. Pagoda in the southeast of area expanded and new additional buildings
were built
during 10 years.
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