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Map of hospital developments in 2007 and 2010

Map of hospital developments in 2007 and 2010 wKQYr

The two maps visualise developments of roads and other transportation facilities as the access to City Hospital in 2007 and 2010. Overall, there are some overhauling on the roads connecting City Hospital and other roads on its south side between 2007 and 2010. Some transportation facilities and cars are also vastly refurbished between those years. Roads linking City Hospital with other roads have been visibly improved in three years period after 2007. There are two newly built roundabouts on the intersection between Ring Road, which circumnavigates the hospital and Hospital Road on of south face of the hospital, and between Hospital Road and City Road, which lies from west to east. Regarding other transport facilities, new developments have also been built. The old car park which was shared between public and staff cars infront of the south entry of City Hospital has been repurposed for staff cars only, while public could have their cars parked on the newly built facility on the east side of the hospital. Several bus stops which were located on both sides of Hospital Road have now demolished. Newly built bus station had been operating in 2010 on the west side of Hospital Road, facing the staff car park. Two connecting roads has been built to connect both end of bus station and Hospital Road.

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roads
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roads
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improved
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hospital
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Hospital
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Road
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hospital
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cars
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Road
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end
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Hospital
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