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Map of hospital developments in 2007 and 2010

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The two maps visualise developments of roads and other transportation facilities as the access to City Hospital in 2007 and 2010. Overall, there are some overhauling on the roads connecting City Hospital and other roads on its south side between 2007 and 2010. Some transportation facilities and cars are also vastly refurbished between those years. Roads linking City Hospital with other roads have been visibly improved in three years period after 2007. There are two newly built roundabouts on the intersection between Ring Road, which circumnavigates the hospital and Hospital Road on of south face of the hospital, and between Hospital Road and City Road, which lies from west to east. Regarding other transport facilities, new developments have also been built. The old car park which was shared between public and staff cars infront of the south entry of City Hospital has been repurposed for staff cars only, while public could have their cars parked on the newly built facility on the east side of the hospital. Several bus stops which were located on both sides of Hospital Road have now demolished. Newly built bus station had been operating in 2010 on the west side of Hospital Road, facing the staff car park. Two connecting roads has been built to connect both end of bus station and Hospital Road.
The two maps
visualise
developments of
roads
and
other
transportation facilities as the access to City
Hospital
in 2007 and 2010.

Overall
, there are
some
overhauling on the
roads
connecting City
Hospital
and
other
roads
on its south side between 2007 and 2010.
Some
transportation facilities and
cars
are
also
vastly
refurbished between those years.

Roads linking City
Hospital
with
other
roads
have been
visibly
improved
in three years period after 2007. There are two
newly
built roundabouts on the intersection between Ring
Road
, which circumnavigates the
hospital
and
Hospital
Road
on of south face of the
hospital
, and between
Hospital
Road
and City
Road
, which lies from west to east.

Regarding
other
transport facilities, new developments have
also
been built
. The
old
car
park which
was shared
between public and staff
cars
infront
of the south entry of City
Hospital
has
been repurposed
for staff
cars
only
, while public could have their
cars
parked on the
newly
built facility on the east side of the
hospital
. Several bus
stops
which
were located
on both
sides
of
Hospital
Road
have
now
demolished.
Newly
built bus station had been operating in 2010 on the west side of
Hospital
Road
, facing the staff
car
park. Two connecting
roads
has
been built
to connect both
end
of bus station and
Hospital
Road
.
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