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The given graph shows peoples consumption per week from 1979 to 2004, a period of 25 years.

The given graph shows peoples consumption per week from 1979 to 2004, a period of 25 years. PVrE2
The given graph shows peoples consumption per week from 1979 to 2004, a period of 25 years. Overall, the beef and lamb decreased rapidly while chicken increased progressively within the last five years. It is aboveall obvious that fish remained almost unchanged within 50 grams and 100 grams from between 1979 and 2004. Beef started at merely below one hundred fifty and two hundred fifty in 1979 and somewhat surge. And moreover, the chicken and lamb usage same level per week in the 1979. Furthermore, the consumption of beef and chicken 200 grams per week. Then chicken peaked rapidly. And also, the beef plunged sharply. From 1979 to 1989 the consumption of lamb experience a period of volatility. After that eat of the lamb was gone down dramatically. The consumption of fish was the middle of fifty and a hundred per week. Over the entire period fish utilization never rose above fifty and did not go under hundred.
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from 1979 to 2004, a period of 25 years.

Overall
, the
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beef
and
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lamb
decreased
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while chicken increased
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within the last five years. It is
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obvious that fish remained almost unchanged within 50 grams and 100 grams from between 1979 and
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2004. Beef
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at
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below one hundred fifty and two hundred fifty in 1979 and somewhat surge. And
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, the chicken and
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lamb
usage same level per
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week
in the 1979.
Furthermore
, the
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consumption
of
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beef
and chicken 200 grams per
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week
. Then chicken peaked
rapidly
. And
also
, the
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beef
plunged
sharply
.

From 1979 to 1989 the
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consumption
of
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lamb
experience a period of volatility.
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After
that eat of the
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lamb
was gone
down
dramatically
. The
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consumption
of fish was the middle of fifty and a hundred per
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week
. Over the entire period fish utilization never rose above fifty and did not go under hundred.

IELTS academic The given graph shows peoples consumption per week from 1979 to 2004, a period of 25 years.

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