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The given graph show the wheat export for 3 regions from1985 to 1990

The given graph show the wheat export for 3 regions from1985 to 1990 r8dgk
The rendered line graps illustrates the information regarding export of wheat to three distinct areas of world from 1985 to 1990. The data is calibrating in million of towns. Overall, it is apparently visible that accept Australia, an upward trend can be observed for the wheat export in Canada and Europe community in the last year. It can be clearly seen that in the year 1985, 90 million tonnes of wheat was exported from Canada after one years. This figure follwed decreasing trend by approximately 1700 million tonnes. furthermore, by 1988 the figure had noticed tourist in the peak at 25 million tonnes but declined sharply in 1989 at 1400million tonnes and at last year this figure stood at 1900 millions tonnes. Nextly, in European community exported 1700 million tons of wheat in 1985 then in 1990 this figure was highest at 21 million of tonnes while exporting from Australia of wheat was remained the lowest in both year in1985and 1990 as well as the figure of exporting stood at a 1500 million tonnes and 11 million tonne respectively.
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illustrates the information regarding export of
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wheat
to three distinct areas of world from 1985 to 1990. The data is calibrating in
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million
of towns.
Overall
, it is
apparently
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be observed
for the
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wheat
export in Canada and Europe community in the last
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year
. It can be
clearly
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that in the
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1985, 90
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million
tonnes of
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wheat
was exported
from Canada after
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one years
. This
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figure
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follwed
decreasing trend by approximately 1700
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million
tonnes.
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furthermore
, by 1988 the
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figure
had noticed tourist in the peak at 25
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million
tonnes
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declined
sharply
in 1989 at
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1400million
tonnes and at last
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year
this
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figure
stood at 1900
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millions
tonnes.
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Nextly
, in European community exported 1700
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million
tons of
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wheat
in 1985 then in 1990 this
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figure
was highest at 21
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million
of tonnes while exporting from Australia of
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wheat
was remained
the lowest in both
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year
in1985and 1990
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the
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figure
of exporting stood at a 1500
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million
tonnes and 11
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tonne
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IELTS academic The given graph show the wheat export for 3 regions from1985 to 1990

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