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The given drawing illustrates by which plastic bottles are converted into garments in a variety of stages.

The given drawing illustrates by which plastic bottles are converted into garments in a variety of stages. X7q0E
The given drawing illustrates by which plastic bottles are converted into garments in a variety of stages. From an overall perspective, it is obvious that the process involves 13 steps, beginning with collecting bottles and the finished products are released in the final step. As can be seen from the diagram, the process commences with the assemblage of plastic bottles, and then they are delivered to factories by truck. Next, these bottles are put through a roller for sorting before being cut by a cutter. Once they are crumbled, these small pieces are laid in a specialized machine for washing. After being clean, the plastic pieces are dried under the sun for 10 hours before being boiled in another large oven. Regarding remaining stages, water is strained off and the melted plastic is obtained afterwards, ready for the next production stages. Subsequently, yarn is made from the resulting plastic and then go through stages of weaving and rolling. Finally, clothes made from recycled materials are available.
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given
drawing illustrates by which
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plastic
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bottles
are converted
into garments in a variety of stages.

From an
overall
perspective, it is obvious that the process involves 13 steps, beginning with collecting
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bottles
and the finished products
are released
in the final step.

As can be
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seen
from the diagram, the process commences with the assemblage of
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plastic
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bottles
, and then they
are delivered
to factories by truck.
Next
, these
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bottles
are put
through a roller for sorting
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before
being
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cut
by a cutter. Once they
are crumbled
, these
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small
pieces
are laid
in a specialized machine for washing. After being clean, the
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plastic
pieces
are dried
under the sun for 10 hours
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before
being boiled
in another large oven.

Regarding remaining stages, water
is strained
off and the melted
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plastic
is obtained
afterwards, ready for the
next
production stages.
Subsequently
, yarn
is made
from the resulting
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plastic
and then go through stages of weaving and rolling.
Finally
, clothes made from recycled materials are available.
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IELTS academic The given drawing illustrates by which plastic bottles are converted into garments in a variety of stages.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
166 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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