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The given diagram shows how the weather information is collected by Australian Bureau of Meteorology duo to forecast the weather.

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The given diagram shows how the weather information is collected by Australian Bureau of Meteorology duo to forecast the weather. There are three ways of gathering datas such as satellite, radar, and the drifting buoy. This data is then analysed, prepared for presentation and finally broadcast to the public. To begin with, the satellite captures photos of Australian weather from the outside of the planet. These images are shown on the radar screen and earned synoptic chart by drifting buoy. After that, all these raw information is sended to the computer to analyse and prepare for broadcasting to the public. Finally, the weather forecasts will be published through different devices such as television, radio and recorded announcement.
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how the
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weather
information
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by Australian Bureau of Meteorology duo to forecast the
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weather
. There are three ways of gathering
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datas
such as satellite, radar, and the drifting buoy. This data is then
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analysed
, prepared for presentation and
finally
broadcast to the public.

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begin
with, the satellite captures photos of Australian
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weather
from the outside of the planet. These images
are shown
on the radar screen and earned synoptic chart by drifting buoy. After that, all these raw information is
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sended
to the computer to
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analyse
and prepare for broadcasting to the public.

Finally
, the
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weather
forecasts will
be published
through
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different
devices such as television, radio and recorded announcement.

IELTS academic The given diagram shows how the weather information is collected by Australian Bureau of Meteorology duo to forecast the weather.

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