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Given are the line graph and the table providing information about foreign journeys by the UK citizens for multiple reasons from 1989 to 2001. It is explicitly observed that the total number of trips had surged; however, negative correlations have been observed in the figures for holidays, family visits, and other purposes trips. To begin with, there was a soar of 20 million in the number of vacation tours from 1989 to 1998 before a plummet to approximately 40 million in 2001. Despite fluctuations, holidays trips were still top of the list. Moreover, the same trend was also observed in the data on trips for other purposes; particularly, the number of this type reached its peak in 1995 nearly doubling that in 1989 and then dropped significantly to approximately 1%. As regards family visits, the entire period had experienced a steady increase although stability from 1989 to 1992. Furthermore, the number of business trips leveled off at roughly 10%. In terms of all UK trips, traveling had been more predominant with an acceleration of more than 25 million from 1992 to 1998; nevertheless, 2001 had witnessed a plunge in the number of UK journeys.

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 the line graph and the table providing information about foreign journeys by the UK citizens for multiple reasons from 1989 to 2001.

It is explicitly
 observed that the total You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trips
 had surged; however
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 correlations have been observed
 in the figures for holidays, family visits, and other purposes trips.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, there was a soar of 20 million in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of vacation tours from 1989 to 1998 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 a plummet to approximately 40 million in 2001. Despite fluctuations, holidays You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trips
 were still
 top of the list. Moreover
, the same trend was also
 observed in the data on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trips
 for other purposes; particularly
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of this type reached its peak in 1995 nearly
 doubling that in 1989 and then dropped significantly
 to approximately 1%.

As regards family visits, the entire period had experienced a steady increase although stability from 1989 to 1992. Furthermore
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of business You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trips
 leveled off at roughly 10%. In terms of all UK You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trips
, traveling had been more predominant with an acceleration of more than 25 million from 1992 to 1998; nevertheless
, 2001 had witnessed a plunge in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of UK journeys. 