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Clowick Arts Centre in 2005 and today

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The two maps demonstrate changes to the campus of Clowick between 2005 and today. We can see that the Arts Centre made many changes during this period, including new buildings. In the past Concert hall and Cinema were built in the middle of Clowick. However, today they are built in the northern west of Arts Centre. Clowick is added Drama Studio. The Arts Centre are created Central Exhibition Area. In the past Gallery was developed in the western of the campus, today it is developed right-hand corner of the campus. In 2005 there was an empty area of outside of the campus. Trees are planted there and an outdoor exhibition Area is made. So, it is shown that Clowick Arts Centre is move glamorous today and has better facilities than in 2005.
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today
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Arts
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during this period, including new buildings. In the past Concert hall and Cinema
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in the middle of
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.
However
,
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today
they
are built
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Centre
.
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Clowick
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added
Drama Studio. The
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Centre
are created
Central Exhibition Area. In the past Gallery
was developed
in the western of the
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campus
,
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today
it
is developed
right-hand corner of the
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. In 2005 there was an empty area of
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. Trees
are planted
there and an outdoor exhibition Area
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.
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and has better facilities than in 2005.
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