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The pie chart demonstrates the outcomes of using phones to access television. Overall, it can clearly be seen that the main reason for using phones is that people look at the ads on TV to keep themselves busy. However, the amount of viewers to vote for a reality show holds a small minority of outcomes. According to the graph, the most common reasons for using phones to watch TV are that keeping busy with ads, checking whether the information is true and visiting a website mentioned on TV. The reason people keep busy when ads are on television holds a significant amount of the population with 58%. The proportion of utilizing phones to check if information heard on TV is true is 37%, whereas, the number of people who visit a website mentioned on TV is approximately two-fifths of the whole population. On the other hand, the proportion of the reason for looking at what people are saying about what the other people are watching is a fifth of the population. While the least popular reasons are that voting a reality shop with %9 and posting comments online about what viewers are watching with %19.

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