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Map of now and future islip town

Map of now and future islip town xmY79

The maps show the current city of Islip town and the new planned development. Many improvements are made which takes attention towards the city. Currently, it has one Main Road. On the both sides, shop for established, besides, countryside has covered the area in the north and housing has captured the land in South. School is in Southern portion and the park reside in south east. Modifications has changed a lot. Now, main pavement is not in the middle rather than it covered the entire settlement in oval shape. Pedestrain is replaced by it. In the Northern sphere, Bus Station is in West followed by Shopping Centre, car park and Housing to the east, respectively. Then residential has a way to main roadway, directly. There are just minor variations in Southern hemisphere. Summing up, changed map is more precise and perfect. Places and every region are provided specific zone, , particularly. Obviously, renovated city will be source of attraction.

The maps This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 city of Possible spelling mistake found.SlipISIPI slipIs lip
Islip
 town and the new planned development. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
 improvements are made
 which takes attention towards the city.

Currently
, it has one Main Road. On the both sides, shop for established, besides
, countryside has covered the area in the north and housing has captured the land in South. School is in Southern portion and the park reside in This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.south-eastsoutheast
south east
.

Possible agreement error. You should probably use: "modification has".Modification has
Modifications has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 a lot. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, main pavement is not in the middle rather
 than it covered the entire settlement in oval shape. Possible spelling mistake found.Pedestrian
Pedestrain
is replaced
 by it.

In the Northern sphere, Bus Station is in West followed by Shopping Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.Center
Centre
, car park and Housing to the east, respectively
. Then residential has a way to main roadway, directly
. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 minor variations in If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Southern Hemisphere
Southern hemisphere
.

Summing up, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 map is more precise and perfect. Places and every region are provided
 specific zone,Two consecutive commas,
 ,
particularly
. Obviously
, renovated city will be Consider using a past participle here: "sourced".sourced
source
 of attraction. 