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Process of producing tomato ketchup

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The diagram highlights the process of which tomato ketchup is made. The procedure includes 15 stages beginning with picking up tomatoes till serving it with hamburger and fries. Initially, tomatoes are picked and put in baskets. Subsequently, before having been sent to the factory, tomatoes are sorted according to their quality. The following step is that once the stalk and seeds have been removed, they are put into special containers to be crushed. The process of adding additives including sugar, vinegar and salt, follows the stage of boiling. After having been left for two hours, the ready ketchup is poured in containers. Before the bottles of ketchup are delivered to supermarkets where people can buy them, they have undergone 3 stages: labelling, quality control and putting into boxes. The final step is that you serve a bottle of ketchup with hamburger and fries, then enjoy the taste.
The diagram highlights the process of which tomato
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ketchup
is made
. The procedure includes 15 stages beginning with picking up tomatoes till serving it with hamburger and fries.
Initially
, tomatoes
are picked
and put in baskets.
Subsequently
,
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before
having been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
to the factory, tomatoes
are sorted
according to their quality. The following step is that once the stalk and seeds have
been removed
, they
are put
into special containers to
be crushed
. The process of adding additives including sugar, vinegar and salt, follows the stage of boiling. After having been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
for two hours, the ready
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ketchup
is poured
in containers.
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Before
the bottles of
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ketchup
are delivered
to supermarkets where
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people
can
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buy
them, they have undergone 3 stages: labelling, quality control and putting into boxes. The final step is that you serve a bottle of
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ketchup
with hamburger and fries, then enjoy the taste.
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IELTS academic Process of producing tomato ketchup

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
147 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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