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The given diagram below describes how instant noodles are produced in 8 steps. From storage silos until labeling.

The given diagram below describes how instant noodles are produced in 8 steps. From storage silos until labeling. 7aMwA
As it can be seen that flour is delivered to storage silos, and sent to mixer, where water and oil are added to flour. Before it is moved to dough strips it comes through rollers and dough sheets. In fivth and sixth step noodle will be ready to packaged, by passing through noodles discs and after being cooked with oil and drying. Like it is shown in seventh and eighth step, dried noodles come out in cups to be added vegetables and spices. And finally in the step of labelling and sealing. Now noodles are ready to be sent to market. Overall, the diagram provides how noodles manufactured in 8 procedures.
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that flour
is delivered
to storage silos, and
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sent
to mixer, where water and oil are
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added
to flour.
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Before
it is
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moved
to dough strips it
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comes
through rollers and dough sheets. In
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fivth
and sixth step
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noodle
will be ready to packaged, by passing through
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noodles
discs and after
being cooked
with oil and drying.

Like it
is shown
in seventh and eighth step, dried
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noodles
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come
out in cups to be
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added
vegetables and spices. And
finally
in the step of labelling and sealing.
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Now
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noodles
are ready to be
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sent
to market.

Overall
, the diagram provides how
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noodles
manufactured in 8 procedures.

IELTS academic The given diagram below describes how instant noodles are produced in 8 steps. From storage silos until labeling.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
111 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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