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The table illustrates the forecasted money spend in three various places to maintain forests. The pie chart demonstrates the predicted spending for the first year of the project figured in 2020 to 2024. The prediction for West Africa will be 10. 5 million dollars in 2020. The budget will decrease to $7. 5M and then to 2. 5 million dollars for 2022-2023. Even though it is expected that 20 million dollars will be allocated to Central America which will go down by 8 million dollars, it will be static in rest of the period at $5M. the anticipation indicates that 30 and 20 million dollars will be spent South-east Asia respectively. However< there will be a rise in budget ($40m) in 2022 and then it will reach to 50 million dollars for 2023-2024. Based on pie chart half the anticipated spending will be given to salaries and 30 per cent will be spent in set-up prices. Remaining %20 is equally given to office expenses and training. Overall, south-east asia will contribute considerably in sustainable forestry more than other rgions.
The table illustrates the forecasted money spend in three various places to maintain forests. The pie

chart demonstrates the predicted spending for the
first
year of the project figured in 2020 to 2024.

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The
prediction for West Africa will be 10. 5
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in 2020. The budget will decrease to $7. 5M

and then to 2. 5
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for 2022-2023.
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that 20
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million
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will
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to Central America which will go down by 8
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, it will be static in rest of the period

at $5M.
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the
anticipation indicates that 30 and 20
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will
be spent
South-east Asia

respectively
.
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However
< there will be a rise in budget ($40m) in 2022 and then it will reach to 50 million

dollars for 2023-2024.

Based on pie chart half the anticipated spending will be
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given
to salaries and 30 per cent will
be spent
in

set-up prices. Remaining %20 is
equally
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given
to office expenses and training.

Overall
, south-east
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asia
will contribute
considerably
in sustainable forestry more than other
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rgions
.

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