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The given column graph illustrates the birth rate in 5 countries namely India, Thailand, Mexico, Spain and Somalia.

The given column graph illustrates the birth rate in 5 countries namely India, Thailand, Mexico, Spain and Somalia. 7qOA
The given column graph illustrates the birth rate in 5 countries namely India, Thailand, Mexico, Spain and Somalia. It is clear from the graph that in Somalia the number of births per woman increased over time, whereas in all other given countries, either the birth rate remained the same or decreased over a period of three decades. In 1970, India superseded all the given countries by having 5. 2 births per woman. It was closely followed by Thailand at 4. 8 births per woman. Mexico, Spain and Somalia had between 2. 8 and 3. 1 births per woman. In 2000, Somalia took the lead and had the highest number of childbirths per woman (3. 6 approximately). India and Mexico both had around 3 births per woman. Spain and Thailand had between 1 and 2 childbirths per woman. Overall, in Mexico the birth rate did not change over time. India, Thailand and Spain showed a significant downward trend in the birth rate. Somalia showed an upward trend in the number of children born per woman.
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in 5 countries
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from the graph that in Somalia the number of
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per
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increased over time, whereas in all other
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countries, either the
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remained the same or decreased over a period of three decades.

In 1970, India superseded all the
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countries by having 5. 2
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per
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. It was
closely
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. Mexico, Spain and Somalia had between 2. 8 and 3. 1
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per woman.

In 2000, Somalia took the lead and had the highest number of childbirths per
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(3. 6 approximately). India and Mexico both had around 3
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per
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. Spain and Thailand had between 1 and 2 childbirths per woman.

Overall
, in Mexico the
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did not
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over time. India, Thailand and Spain
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a significant downward trend in the
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. Somalia
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an upward trend in the number of children born per
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.
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IELTS academic The given column graph illustrates the birth rate in 5 countries namely India, Thailand, Mexico, Spain and Somalia.

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