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Fundraiser event - Percentage of total money raised by grade level

Fundraiser event - Percentage of total money raised by grade level 5Q9m

The above chart shows fundraised in a recent event at King Primary school through various activities conducted by 1st to 6th-grade level students. The pie chart shown above is using a percentage breakdown to show the fund raised by each level independently. The activities done by each grade are mentioned in the table above the chart. It's clear from the chart that, the highest revenue came from Dance contest (23. 7%), Cake decorating contest (20. 9%), and cookie sales (18. 3%). Soccer skill managed to collect 15. 5% and activities that collected the least funds were Art sale (13. 9%) and book sale (7. 8%). The grade level which collected the highest funds were 1st, 2nd, and 5th-grade which took the first, second and third place. 6th grade managed to come fourth place and the least performing grades at the fifth and sixth place are 4th and 3rd-grade. It is interesting to note that dance and food-related activities performed better. Soccer skills seemed to have performed decently. Low performings were art sale and book sale making the least contribution for the fundraiser.

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