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The given charts illustrate that how much usage of water in six countries namely North America, South America, Europe, Africa, central Asia, and South East Asia in three fields.

The given charts illustrate that how much usage of water in six countries namely North America, South America, Europe, Africa, central Asia, and South East Asia in three fields. qVR0a
The given charts illustrate that how much usage of water in six countries namely North America, South America, Europe, Africa, central Asia, and South East Asia in three fields. Overall, except North America and Europe, all area of the world is highly using water in agricultural side, whereas, unlike South America, almost all country least uses of water in domestic area. To embark, in industrial sides, the first come county is Europe which is using 53% of water in that. Then second of the list is North America, water is used in industrial field, with 48% by them. In agricultural area, water is used 39% which is three time that of using water in domestical area. On the other hand, in Africa, central Asia and South East Asia, they utilize water in agricultural area than rest of other, with more than 80%. The 7% Water is used in area, which is domestic, same in both country such as Central Asia and South East Asia.
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IELTS academic The given charts illustrate that how much usage of water in six countries namely North America, South America, Europe, Africa, central Asia, and South East Asia in three fields.

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