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The graph illustrates that emission of carbon dioxide per each person in countries such as United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal during 1967 to 2007.

The graph illustrates that emission of carbon dioxide per each person in countries such as United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal during 1967 to 2007. e5bAp
The graph illustrates that emission of carbon dioxide per each person in countries such as United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal during 1967 to 2007. Overall, the line of United Kingdom was declined during 1967-2007, whereas, in Italy, the co2 emission gradually increased in given times. The highest emission was 11 metric tones by the United Kingdom, on the other side, least value of it was 1 in Portugal country. To embark, in Sweden, firstly emission rose in 10 years then suddenly fall down to nearly 5 metric tones. The starting year 1967, United Kingdom which was the apex emission country with 11 tones. However, it went down strictly in following years to 11 to 9 tones. On the other side, Portugal did least emission overseas of 1 metric. Although, it went up to 5 metrics in 2007 year. The line of Italy first started with 4 tones then after it had gone up and more to roughly 7 tones in 2007.
The graph illustrates that
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of carbon dioxide per each person in countries such as
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United
Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal during 1967 to 2007.

Overall
, the line of
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United
Kingdom
was declined
during 1967-2007, whereas, in Italy, the co2
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emission
gradually
increased in
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given
times. The highest
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was 11 metric
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tones
by the
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United
Kingdom, on the other side,
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least
value of it was 1 in Portugal country.

To embark, in Sweden,
firstly
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rose in 10 years then
suddenly
fall down to
nearly
5 metric
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tones
. The starting
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year
1967,
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United
Kingdom which was the apex
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emission
country with 11
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tones
.
However
, it went down
strictly
in following years to 11 to 9 tones.

On the other side, Portugal did
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least
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emission
overseas of 1 metric.
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, it went up to 5 metrics in 2007
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. The line of Italy
first
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started
with 4
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then after it had gone up and more to roughly 7
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in 2007.

IELTS academic The graph illustrates that emission of carbon dioxide per each person in countries such as United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal during 1967 to 2007.

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