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The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal. 15oAN
Well, the given picture illustrates the information about the production of electricity with the utilisation of coal. Overall, in the production of electricity by using coal has several steps in which a coal is used as primary source. To begin with, coal is delivered by the truck; in second step, coal is transferred by conveyor belt into the large furnace in which oxygen is also added. After that, raw syngas is produced. In the next stage, harmful gases like carbon dioxide and mercury sulphur is being removed in the removal stage. following that, purified syngas is transferred to gas turbine which is connected to generator to produce electricity. Further more, purified syngas through the gas turbine is moved the hot recovery steam generator in which fuel gases is removed through the chimney and after that remained pure from of steam is transferred to steam turbine to produce electricity which is also connected to the generator.
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picture illustrates the information about the production of
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electricity
with the
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utilisation
of coal.
Overall
, in the production of
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electricity
by using coal has several steps in which a coal is
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used
as primary source. To
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begin
with, coal
is delivered
by the truck; in second step, coal
is transferred
by conveyor belt into the large furnace in which oxygen is
also
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added
. After that, raw
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syngas
is produced
. In the
next
stage, harmful gases like carbon dioxide and mercury
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sulphur
is
being removed
in the removal stage.
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following
that, purified
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syngas
is transferred
to gas turbine which
is connected
to generator to produce
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electricity
.
Further
more, purified
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syngas
through the gas turbine is
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moved
the hot recovery steam generator in which fuel gases
is removed
through the chimney and after that remained pure from of steam
is transferred
to steam turbine to produce
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electricity
which is
also
connected to the generator.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal.

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