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The given chart shows the process of how carbon dioxide produces,move to air and absorbs.

The given chart shows the process of how carbon dioxide produces, move to air and absorbs. BJby9

The provided chart illustrates the process of carbon dioxide emission, its movement around the atmosphere and how it is easily absorbed. Overall, it can be seen from the picture, it is cyclical process caused by nature as well as by humans' action, consists of various steps to occur. The main source of CO2 or carbon dioxide gas are particularly related to electricity production, transports fuel and factories. For instance, CO2 is released into air when the electricity stations start producing electricity to regulate factories as long as the huge amount of toxic fumes predominantly comes from factories. Those manufactured goods are transported to markets by vehicles which run with fuel. As a result, cars' used fuel affects to environment as poisonous gas. At the same time CO2 gasses are absorbed by trees which are the only means of environment protection. Those trees are certainly connected with ground layers. Therefore they are harmful enough because of wastes. The last step of the process occurs when fossil fuels(oil and coal) are taken from mines. It results in the beginning of process again once fossil fuels are utilised by cars and factories.

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