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The bar graph discribe the information about cheicle owenership in China. Wrtie a report.

The bar graph discribe the information about cheicle owenership in China. Wrtie a report. 15BOq
The bar graph shows how many people per million owned an automobile in China during the period 1987 to 1999. There is clearly a trend that over the years it has become more common to own a vehicle in China. In 1999 the population per million that owned any type of transport was four times more than in 1987. Between 1987 and 1991 we can observe a slightly increased vehicle ownership. In 1987 it was 2 thousand per million people who owned an automobile and in 1991 that figure rose to 5 thousand per million people. Between 1991 and 1999 there was a significant increase in vehicle ownership. Although the increase is gradual and it was in 1999 when it reached the peak, a bit more than 4 thousand per million people owned a means of transport. Overall, it can be seen that the popular trend to own any type of transport has become more and more poupar over the years. When in 1987 only a few thousands per million people owned a vehicle at the end of the 90s that number rose above 4 thousand per million people.
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an automobile in China during the period 1987 to 1999. There is
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any type of transport was four times more than in 1987.

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an automobile and in 1991 that figure rose to 5 thousand per
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. Between 1991 and 1999 there was a significant increase in
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ownership. Although the increase is gradual and it was in 1999 when it reached the peak, a bit more than 4 thousand per
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a means of transport.

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any type of transport has become more and more
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IELTS academic The bar graph discribe the information about cheicle owenership in China. Wrtie a report.

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